Wednesday 10 July 2013

I Was No Lucifer...


I Was No Lucifer, To Get Pushed
In The Darkness Of Despondency.
My Wishes Vanished In The Aura,
Like The Fumes From My Coffee.
Deep From The Ditch Of Laments,
I Cried, For The Awaited Salvation.
Neither Hope Nor Enlightenment,
I Was Pushed Again By Supremacy,
To The Profound Sorrow Of Infinity.
I Woke Up, Soaked In Perspiration,
Found Myself In The Paradise Again...



(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge)

26 comments :

  1. This was very powerful. Brilliant.

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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  2. Your words are so strong...Great Read.. :-)

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  3. Very absorbing thoughts and and words flowing so naturally. Loved it!

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  4. very profound and captivating . :)

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  5. but then in real life Lucifer is not considered to be that lucky, he is yet to find heaven if scriptures are to be believed. But un-doubtfully your poetry brought Lucifer (light!) into our world :)

    Richa

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    1. Yea in real life Lucifers are not lucky...but since I have hope I am no Lucifer...

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  6. One needs to be in the mud to get sprouted again. Good one Sreedev!

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  7. Profound expression! Wonderful reading :-)

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  8. You surely have deep thoughts rooted to your writing. Good one. :)

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  9. Sometimes when you find darkness around you you need the Fireflies, the luciferon in them burn to signal into hope. Very nice poetry, if you need self inspiration just read the last few lines. Wonderful.

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  10. You need to have lucifers in you \, like the Fireflies the Luciferons burn to make a glow enpugh to walk through the dark patches of life. Wonderful lines. if you are in despair just say the last few lines alone. The luciferons shall give out the cold light.

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  11. Too good Man, you're poetry makes me wanna write them again :) Beautiful words, clear and stands out.and good rhymes too :)

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  12. All but the paradise :) You Display Pic says you are too young for such in-depth thoughts :) A philosophically inclined individual may get addicted to your writing !!

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    1. Oh...Thank You...and I am really young...28 years young....hehe...

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