Saturday, 13 July 2013

Haiku 2: On Rain

Monsoon Mushrooms Grew
Drenching My Deserted Heart
Drizzling Like Her Smile


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27 comments :

  1. Anonymous10:54 pm, July 13, 2013

    Great imagery. :)

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  2. Anonymous11:00 pm, July 13, 2013

    Wow - that's amazing!

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  3. Unknown11:06 pm, July 13, 2013

    That's great!

    I haven't really seen haiku since high school, when we tried to write it ourselves. But I confess, it's not easy for some of us!

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  4. Unknown11:08 pm, July 13, 2013

    That's great.

    I haven't seen haiku since high school.

    It's not easy to convey a message within tight limits, at least not for me.

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    1. Sreedev Soman11:41 pm, July 13, 2013

      Thank You Jennifer...it becomes easy, once you start trying...

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  5. Me5:39 pm, July 14, 2013

    Sree.. this sounds like the effect of magic mushrooms dawning like her smile ;)

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    1. Sreedev Soman8:25 pm, July 14, 2013

      Oh...yeah...really...you got it right!...Thank You...

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  6. Richa Singh7:40 pm, July 14, 2013

    lovely images! the haiku drew the picture right in front of my eyes :)

    Richa

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  7. Tall Girl in Japan 11:28 am, July 15, 2013

    Nice attempt !

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  8. Preetilata【ツ】11:26 pm, July 15, 2013

    Good one

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  9. Anonymous4:36 pm, September 23, 2013

    Beautifully conceptualized !

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  10. Unknown5:50 pm, September 23, 2013

    very sweet.. :)

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  11. Someone is Special1:47 pm, September 24, 2013

    Deserted heart deserted with her smile :D Cool :) Keep writing :)

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  12. Hi10:16 pm, September 24, 2013

    Good one :D

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  13. Aparna Bose11:43 pm, September 24, 2013

    beautiful imagery..loved the haiku

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  14. Unknown12:46 am, September 25, 2013

    Her "smile" - That's the IMPACT! The backbone of the haiku! :)

    Cheers
    Sammya

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