Saturday, 13 July 2013

Haiku 2: On Rain

Monsoon Mushrooms Grew
Drenching My Deserted Heart
Drizzling Like Her Smile


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28 comments :

  1. Wow - that's amazing!

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  2. That's great!

    I haven't really seen haiku since high school, when we tried to write it ourselves. But I confess, it's not easy for some of us!

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  3. That's great.

    I haven't seen haiku since high school.

    It's not easy to convey a message within tight limits, at least not for me.

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    1. Thank You Jennifer...it becomes easy, once you start trying...

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  4. Sree.. this sounds like the effect of magic mushrooms dawning like her smile ;)

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    1. Oh...yeah...really...you got it right!...Thank You...

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  5. lovely images! the haiku drew the picture right in front of my eyes :)

    Richa

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  6. Deserted heart deserted with her smile :D Cool :) Keep writing :)

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  7. beautiful imagery..loved the haiku

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  8. Her "smile" - That's the IMPACT! The backbone of the haiku! :)

    Cheers
    Sammya

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