The Reflection Was Uglier Than Ever,
As I Gawked Into The Heedful Mirrors.
The Dinned Song Trembled Ear Drums,
Amidst The Chaos Of Societal Trumpets.
Then The Lord Abandoned Me, I Thought,
When Even Titanic Sank To Blue Bottoms.
The Rein Was Unfound To Steer The Mind,
Galloping Across The Boundaries Of Insanity.
Hooked By Hallucinations, I Ambled Down,
The Misty & Cloudy By Lanes Of Deception.
Treaded Back To The Wintry Bedlam Again,
But That Reflection Got Uglier Than Ever…
(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge)
As I Gawked Into The Heedful Mirrors.
The Dinned Song Trembled Ear Drums,
Amidst The Chaos Of Societal Trumpets.
Then The Lord Abandoned Me, I Thought,
When Even Titanic Sank To Blue Bottoms.
The Rein Was Unfound To Steer The Mind,
Galloping Across The Boundaries Of Insanity.
Hooked By Hallucinations, I Ambled Down,
The Misty & Cloudy By Lanes Of Deception.
Treaded Back To The Wintry Bedlam Again,
But That Reflection Got Uglier Than Ever…
(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge)
Greetings from UBC!
ReplyDeleteYou have no idea how pleasantly surprised I was to read your awesome poetry! Loved every word!
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DeleteWhat a fabulously dark poem.
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DeleteGreat word pictures.
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DeleteGreat Great...Very nicely carved and the words wow
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Deletestrong, dark, yet lovely! kudos! :)
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DeleteSreeder its your poetry which somehow always transpires different dimensions and compels me to think and feel. Honestly the style of writing that you have in poetry is some of the best I have read...
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DeleteLoved your poetry and the way you presented its darker side.
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DeleteNIce poetry and beautifully presenting the dark side :)
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Deletenice weave of words.
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DeleteLove your choice of words :) Very nicely written :)
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DeleteNice Sreedev punchy poem
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DeleteSreedev the Lord did not abandon in all this ugliness which society has poured on the poor soul. That's such a relief to hear when mind is wandering from pillar to post in search of Nirvana.
ReplyDeleteGood work, Poet!
Good work, Poet!
ReplyDeleteThe writing is dark bot Lord not abandoning the soul is such a relief to know.
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Deleteexpressed in beautiful lines :)
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DeleteDark and emotional verses. Keep it up !
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