Sunday, 7 July 2013

That Ugly Reflection...

The Reflection Was Uglier Than Ever,
As I Gawked Into The Heedful Mirrors.
The Dinned Song Trembled Ear Drums,
Amidst The Chaos Of Societal Trumpets.
Then The Lord Abandoned Me, I Thought,
When Even Titanic Sank To Blue Bottoms.
The Rein Was Unfound To Steer The Mind,
Galloping Across The Boundaries Of Insanity.
Hooked By Hallucinations, I Ambled Down,
The Misty & Cloudy By Lanes Of Deception.
Treaded Back To The Wintry Bedlam Again,
But That Reflection Got Uglier Than Ever…


(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge)

32 comments :

  1. Greetings from UBC!

    You have no idea how pleasantly surprised I was to read your awesome poetry! Loved every word!

    Peggy

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  2. What a fabulously dark poem.
    Rhondda
    via the UBC Challenge

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  3. Great Great...Very nicely carved and the words wow

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  4. strong, dark, yet lovely! kudos! :)

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  5. Sreeder its your poetry which somehow always transpires different dimensions and compels me to think and feel. Honestly the style of writing that you have in poetry is some of the best I have read...

    Richa

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  6. Loved your poetry and the way you presented its darker side.

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  7. NIce poetry and beautifully presenting the dark side :)

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  8. Love your choice of words :) Very nicely written :)

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  9. Sreedev the Lord did not abandon in all this ugliness which society has poured on the poor soul. That's such a relief to hear when mind is wandering from pillar to post in search of Nirvana.

    Good work, Poet!

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  10. Good work, Poet!

    The writing is dark bot Lord not abandoning the soul is such a relief to know.

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  11. expressed in beautiful lines :)

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  12. Dark and emotional verses. Keep it up !

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  14. Ultimate painting of words Sreedev...dropped first time and gonna follow ur new creations!!!

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  15. really awesome writing :) the expression are excellent keep writing & smiling always.

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