Wednesday, 17 July 2013

Intoxicated Pessimism...


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Pessimism, Most Deadly Venom
Intoxicated Those Impure Veins
Plonking Presumptions In Hearts.
Attempts Piled Up At The Bottom
All Of Which Were Intensely Futile
When Thy Ego Garnished The Mind
A Thorough Way To Self Destruction
Formed By Overwhelmed Conscience
Brain Death, The Only Question Then


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32 comments :

  1. Moms Gone Crazy10:02 pm, July 17, 2013

    Nice poem!

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  2. Alexandria Ingham10:05 pm, July 17, 2013

    Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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  3. Sreedev Soman10:05 pm, July 17, 2013

    Thank you...

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  4. Ruth10:06 pm, July 17, 2013

    I wasn't sure what this was, and then I realized you wrote a fantastic poem! I agree that pessimism is something that actually kill everything wonderful! Commenting from the UBC.
    http://mydevotionalthoughts.net

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  5. Unknown7:57 am, July 18, 2013

    This is very powerful and struck a chord with me. I try very hard not to be pessimistic and used to be really bad when I was younger. Now I just take each day as it comes.

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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  6. Anonymous11:59 am, July 18, 2013

    Great Lines on ill effects of Pessimism..Loved it

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  7. Richa Singh7:38 pm, July 18, 2013

    I like your stories but I always prefer your poems somehow :)

    Richa

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    1. Sreedev Soman10:19 am, July 19, 2013

      Haha...Thank you Richa...I am comfortable with poetry, yet on an odyssey, trying every available and possible genre...

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  8. Ankita 1:46 am, July 20, 2013

    thats is nice, deep

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  9. indu chhibber5:01 pm, October 16, 2013

    well said soman-pessimism kills initiative and the zest to live.

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  10. veena8:46 am, October 17, 2013

    Great lines.. as the Pessimist always views the world as bad,

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  11. veena8:47 am, October 17, 2013

    Great lines!!!

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  12. प्रीतेश दुबे 3:09 pm, October 17, 2013

    deeply thought and well written......

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  13. Aditi3:59 pm, October 17, 2013

    Such power in your words. Really liked this poem!!

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  14. Uma Anandane6:10 pm, October 17, 2013

    Short and powerful lines!

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  15. Tomichan Matheikal8:31 pm, October 17, 2013

    The sceptic tank is half full.
    Optimist or Pessimist?

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  16. Garima Nag10:11 pm, October 17, 2013

    Simple lines , power packed message . GR8 write up

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  17. Anonymous11:23 am, October 18, 2013

    Reality served using beatiful lines... I think that these lines might have been the story of everyone of us once in life. It was very impressive. :)

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  18. Anil Krishnanunni12:53 pm, October 19, 2013

    I know bloggers who stopped posting because of this reason... Good work

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  19. Ranjana's craft blog11:29 pm, October 20, 2013

    Nice one...good message too

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  20. Sunita Sriram7:30 pm, December 16, 2013

    Brilliant poetry...liked the verse where ego garnishes the mind! Lovely

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