Tiny Rainbow Drops
Floods All Epidemics In
Where Mosquitoes Lay
(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge) & the Write Tribe prompt.
Floods All Epidemics In
Where Mosquitoes Lay
(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge) & the Write Tribe prompt.
It seems you are talking about Dengue here. If yes, it is indeed very creative. Tiny ones indeed have great power.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sweety...well its my first attempt to write a Haiku...its not just Dengue...it about all those epidemics which hovers around along with the rain...for almost everybody...a rain will be something romantic or at least a fore-teller of happiness...I just wanted to showcase a different side of the same....
DeleteTiny raindrops flow
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Love short to the point haiku's, they always challenge me to see if I can do one.
wow...lovely...loved it Jacqui...you did really well..but I think the second line is short off the required syllables...it should be like 5 7 5
DeleteThats a completely new perspective of the rains !
ReplyDeleteThank you Ruchira...
DeleteGreat Haiku! This is my first experience actually reading them here in the UBC. But they are my kind of reading; short and to the point! :) besides they allow your memory to really got to work filling in the rest. GREAT JOB!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jeff...
DeleteWhile everyone around is talking about the beauty of rains you come up with the wrath it can bring. Very creative...but makes me sad that you make the rains out to be something sad :(
ReplyDeleteThank You...
Deletehaha a different Haiku I rad so far !
ReplyDeleteI too tried for first time via write tribe
good one sreedev
Thank You Afshan...
DeleteA very different and interesting take on the prompt. the tiny rainbow drops has lovely imagery.
ReplyDeleteDropping by from the haiku prompt.
Thank You Suzy...
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Deletethe negative side of monsoon
ReplyDeleteYou are right Kalpana...Thank You for the comment.
DeleteThe mosquitos away. This line is so different and superbly true :D a great haiku from the great poet :)
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Thank You Richa...
DeleteSree..beautiful and erm brought my arch enemy of rains to the fore.. epidemics and mosquitoes :)
ReplyDeleteThank you...
DeleteHahaha...this is the real situation in Bangalore now.
ReplyDeletevery intense lines ...
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ReplyDeleteCreativity at its best...I loved the way you introduced the mosquito.
ReplyDeleteThank You Rekha...
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