Monday, 1 July 2013

Orphaned Thoughts...


Deep Down Those Mindful Lanes,
Thoughts Wandered Like An Orphan,
Freely Aloof From The Worldly Errands.
Glassed Inside A Wine Bottle Of Memoirs,
Solitarily Confined To Squeeze All Essence.
I Signed The Treaty Of Love In Black Blood
Questioning Rareness, A Curse Or A Boon?
Confusions Laid Thorns On My Slimy Ways,
Strangled Them On A Piece Of White Paper,
Where Words Scattered Like Autumn Leaves,
Waded Through Them Like A Humming Bird,
I Ended Up In A Cemetery Of Wild Imaginations,
To Dig-Up The Fossil Of A Superhero Of Times... 



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23 comments :

  1. Excellent blog you have got here.. It's hard to find excellent writing like yours these days. I honestly appreciate people like you! Take care!!

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  2. Ooh. Nice! "Thoughts wandered like an orphan" :)

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  3. Sreedev ... you never fail to inspire me to write .. congrats on the feast of words you own .. its a pleasure reading those lines ...

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  4. A very profound array of words tracing the abstractness of feelings. A great poem.

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  5. Nice blog and writing is supav...

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  6. This is good blog. Well written, Thanks for sharing. Good thinking ......

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  7. good one sreedev. this reminds me of a quote by Marcus Aurelius, who said "The soul becomes dyed with the colour of its thoughts". I wonder what color would stranded thoughts would render to the soul?

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    1. Thank You Jiggyasa...well probably the color can be either black or white...it seems..

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  8. nice composition. amazing weave of words.

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  9. Wow! I don't know why but the first thing that I could relate to these lines was 'Ghostrider'...

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