Sunday, 14 July 2013

Haiku 3: On Rain

Small Colourless Falls
Perfumes Sand To Reproduce
Turning Planet Green



(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge) & the Write Tribe prompt.


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38 comments :

  1. Stopping by from UBC

    I love your haiku! Love the connection between something that's colorless turning the earth green!

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  2. Nice imagery. My favorite type of weather too.

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  3. I totally LOVE the fragrance wafting as the first drops of rain kiss the Earth :) :)

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    1. Thank You Bhavya... I too love that unusual fragrance...

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  4. You really are on a Haiku writing mission :)

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  5. haiku are addictive. I keep saying it to everyone. The haiku is actually very well crafted and shows the perfect element of monsoons :)

    Richa

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  6. The scent of the first rain wafted from this enchanting Haiku :)
    Very sensory :)

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  7. Nice Read
    ... I feel Rains are the most inspirational object for a poet/writer.

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    1. You are absolutely right Ashish...Rains are inspiring ...Thank You

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  8. i have always loved the rains :) wonderfully written!

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  9. Wonderfully written. I like Haiku :-)

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  10. This is a good Haiku. Keep writing :)

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  11. lovely!!
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  12. Good one. Can I participate in this contest or they don't accept entries now?

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    1. Thank You Pravin...Well the contest has already been closed...and I have been posting my older posts on IB.

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  13. Wow! Now this is a contradiction. Loved it. :-)

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  14. Great thought! keep smiling :)

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