Like A Dark Cloud, I Wandered,
To Shed The Rain & Get Lighter,
But For Those Drought Strikers,
It Was More Of A Cup Of Solace.
The Romantics Burped Poetries,
As I Wept On The Dusty Deserts.
Saw A Green Cabaret Of Nature
As Thunders Electrified Guitars.
Even The Sun Seems Detached
And The Moon Was Dark & Cold
Bestowed To Wail For A Season,
Who Seeks What The Cloud Felt?
(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge)
But For Those Drought Strikers,
It Was More Of A Cup Of Solace.
The Romantics Burped Poetries,
As I Wept On The Dusty Deserts.
Saw A Green Cabaret Of Nature
As Thunders Electrified Guitars.
Even The Sun Seems Detached
And The Moon Was Dark & Cold
Bestowed To Wail For A Season,
Who Seeks What The Cloud Felt?
(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge)
Wao.. Awesome use of words..I always wished I could be a poet but not everyone is so talented :)
ReplyDeleteIts always about the rains & the people enjoying it. No one cares about the clouds, alas!
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DeleteI can see it, this lonely depressed soul. Thanks for the image.
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Deletenice peace of read... keep writing.
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Deletehow deep... true who cares what the giver felt? Who is really concerned where the tree went after bearing the fruit...
ReplyDeleteRicha
Beautiful Composition!:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Tarang...
DeleteA fabulous poem. The words coming out straight from the heart!!
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DeleteLoved every bit of it :)
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DeleteSplendid composition as always !
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Deleteawesum lines!!
ReplyDeleteThank You...Aparna
DeleteBeautiful lines :) message wonderfully conveyed :)
ReplyDeleteThank You...Preethi
DeleteBut you did think of the grey dark clouds and spelt out a beauty! Lovely lovely lines!
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DeleteSreedev awesome poem!!
ReplyDeleteLovely expressions and imagery!
ReplyDeleteThank You...Ilakshee
DeleteBeautiful poem :)
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DeleteLoved for its simple and deep thoughts..
ReplyDeleteThank You...Bharani
DeleteLoved it, really great poem Sreedev keep it up....
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DeleteNice...really liked it
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DeleteThere's a touch of the Metaphysical poetry to it. The lines look like a lump, quite suited to the theme of the poem.
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DeleteBeautiful ...:)
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DeleteBeautiful and thoughtful poetry! "As thunders electrified guitars" I loved the way you connected music and nature in this line :)
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DeleteLovely poem !
ReplyDeleteThank You Uma...
DeleteWas there an image in the post? Couldn't notice
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