Tuesday, 9 July 2013

What The Cloud Felt?


Like A Dark Cloud, I Wandered,
To Shed The Rain & Get Lighter,
But For Those Drought Strikers,
It Was More Of A Cup Of Solace.
The Romantics Burped Poetries,
As I Wept On The Dusty Deserts.
Saw A Green Cabaret Of Nature
As Thunders Electrified Guitars.
Even The Sun Seems Detached
And The Moon Was Dark & Cold
Bestowed To Wail For A Season,
Who Seeks What The Cloud Felt?




(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge)


43 comments :

  1. Wao.. Awesome use of words..I always wished I could be a poet but not everyone is so talented :)

    Its always about the rains & the people enjoying it. No one cares about the clouds, alas!

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  2. I can see it, this lonely depressed soul. Thanks for the image.

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  3. nice peace of read... keep writing.

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  4. how deep... true who cares what the giver felt? Who is really concerned where the tree went after bearing the fruit...

    Richa

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  5. A fabulous poem. The words coming out straight from the heart!!

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  6. Splendid composition as always !

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  7. Beautiful lines :) message wonderfully conveyed :)

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  8. But you did think of the grey dark clouds and spelt out a beauty! Lovely lovely lines!

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  9. Lovely expressions and imagery!

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  10. Loved for its simple and deep thoughts..

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  11. Loved it, really great poem Sreedev keep it up....

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  12. There's a touch of the Metaphysical poetry to it. The lines look like a lump, quite suited to the theme of the poem.

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  13. Beautiful and thoughtful poetry! "As thunders electrified guitars" I loved the way you connected music and nature in this line :)

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  14. Was there an image in the post? Couldn't notice

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