Friday 12 July 2013

Haiku 1: On Rain


Tiny Rainbow Drops
Floods All Epidemics In
Where Mosquitoes Lay


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(Linking this to Ultimate Blog Challenge) & the Write Tribe prompt.

28 comments :

  1. It seems you are talking about Dengue here. If yes, it is indeed very creative. Tiny ones indeed have great power.

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    1. Thank you Sweety...well its my first attempt to write a Haiku...its not just Dengue...it about all those epidemics which hovers around along with the rain...for almost everybody...a rain will be something romantic or at least a fore-teller of happiness...I just wanted to showcase a different side of the same....

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  2. Tiny raindrops flow
    Feed Mother Earth
    Grow and beauty reign

    Love short to the point haiku's, they always challenge me to see if I can do one.

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    1. wow...lovely...loved it Jacqui...you did really well..but I think the second line is short off the required syllables...it should be like 5 7 5

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  3. Thats a completely new perspective of the rains !

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  4. Great Haiku! This is my first experience actually reading them here in the UBC. But they are my kind of reading; short and to the point! :) besides they allow your memory to really got to work filling in the rest. GREAT JOB!

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  5. While everyone around is talking about the beauty of rains you come up with the wrath it can bring. Very creative...but makes me sad that you make the rains out to be something sad :(

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  6. haha a different Haiku I rad so far !
    I too tried for first time via write tribe
    good one sreedev

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  7. A very different and interesting take on the prompt. the tiny rainbow drops has lovely imagery.
    Dropping by from the haiku prompt.

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    1. Hi Silky...you are always welcome...but to be frank...I just know the basics of SEO, I am more into SEM (Search Engine Marketing-Google Adwords & Yahoo Ad Centre).

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    1. You are right Kalpana...Thank You for the comment.

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  10. The mosquitos away. This line is so different and superbly true :D a great haiku from the great poet :)

    Richa

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  11. Sree..beautiful and erm brought my arch enemy of rains to the fore.. epidemics and mosquitoes :)

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  12. Hahaha...this is the real situation in Bangalore now.

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  14. Creativity at its best...I loved the way you introduced the mosquito.

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