Life Seems To Have Shed Its Unusual
Surprises, As
Time Needles Turned Monotonous & Predictable,
& Even Dimples Have Been Roofed By The Pimples.
Cramped To Religion, Work, Food & Love Making,
It’s Just Another Cabaret Performed By Freaky Soul.
Edifices Are Being Planted & Watered Everyday &
Computer Language Has Become A National Idiom.
The Dumb Planet Just Chats, But Cease To Converse,
Where Science Has Become Cancerous To All Species
Amidst All, I Wish To Be That Grasshopper Under That,
White Mushroom, Enjoying The Mizzles Of Yesterday.
Time Needles Turned Monotonous & Predictable,
& Even Dimples Have Been Roofed By The Pimples.
Cramped To Religion, Work, Food & Love Making,
It’s Just Another Cabaret Performed By Freaky Soul.
Edifices Are Being Planted & Watered Everyday &
Computer Language Has Become A National Idiom.
The Dumb Planet Just Chats, But Cease To Converse,
Where Science Has Become Cancerous To All Species
Amidst All, I Wish To Be That Grasshopper Under That,
White Mushroom, Enjoying The Mizzles Of Yesterday.
Very thoughtful composition, how we miss the simpler days.
ReplyDelete& even the dimples have been roofed by pimples.... liked this line
Thank You Kislaya...
Deletevery nice!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sahi...
Deletenicely expressed ! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Paresh.
Deleteimpressive
ReplyDeleteThank You Manojna
DeleteVery precisely put. We all chat but cease to converse...how apt!
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DeleteI am your fan . Your poems are very inspirational .
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Thank You Ashish...
DeleteInteresting post, loved the analogy- Science and cancer and Chat- Conversation
ReplyDeleteThank You Vikram...
DeleteVery aptly described the negatives of today's world...and your last line or the punch line is as impressive as your poem..."I wish to be the grasshopper..."
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DeleteA very good one.......
ReplyDeleteThank You Debopam
DeleteAh what an end....it was great
ReplyDeleteThank You Ritesh...
DeleteThe best part :
ReplyDelete"The Dumb Planet Chats, But Cease to Converse"
Amazing Poem Sreedav !!
Thank You Pritam
DeleteThank You Anand
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