Thursday, 16 May 2013

That Smile...


That Smile Dabs Away My Unseen Whimpers
& For A While The Wall Clock Asks Me The Time
Then I Lay Drenched In The Rain Of A Sunny Day
& The Zephyr Chills My Soul For No Better Reason,
But It’s Not Dark Now, As I Close My Shadowed Eyes
Since I Have To Open It To Amass New Dew Drops,
From The Lush Green Of That Fresh Wintery Dawn.
The Calendar Dates Start Fluttering Like Butterflies  
As I Wait For The Hissing Friday On That Platform
To Get That Glimpse & Treasure It For A Week Long.

23 comments :

  1. very nicely expressed Sreedev. What I love the most about your poems is they are short and impactful.. God Bless :)

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    1. Thanks A Lot...that's encouraging ...

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  2. Oh very sweet :) How difficult it is to pass time when your heart is anxiously waiting. :) beautiful!

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    1. Thank You...yeah its very difficult..

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  3. Beautiful and endearing. Thanks for this cute poem on love and longing Sreedev. The last three lines struck a chord.

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  4. Loved it, Sreedev! I really appreciate your vocabulary. :)I enjoyed reading this one particular line "& the zephyr chills my soul for no better reason". Great one. Good day.:)

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  5. Loved it, Sreedev! I loved one line in particular "& the zephyr chills my soul for no better reason". Great job! Good day :)

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  6. Yes indeed its short and beautiful .. a nice piece ! loved it !

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    1. Thank You...I am blessed that somebody smiles because of me...

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  8. Thought provoking...imaginations glorified...!!!

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