Monday, 3 June 2013

She Left In The Rain...


She Left In The Rain Without My Umbrella
Creating A Deep Negated Space In My Spirits,
The Miles I Covered Still Lay Green In History,
But Her Smile Was Still Throbbing Somewhere,
As Her Eyes Mused A Hymn To Soothe My Brain,
I Walked Alone, Enjoying Life’s Pungent Sarcasms,
& Nature Being That Unpaid Event Manager, Had
Already Set The Aura Of An Utopian Melancholy,
Making Me Appreciate, That Even 2 Months Skip,
Faster Than The Sound Waves, & As Her Distant
Voice Drenched Me Then, Night Stayed Boisterous,
& Dawn Left My Reveries As Unanswered Soliloquies,
& I Wait With Anticipation, For That Next Friday Evening...

34 comments :

  1. Nice Poem. I liked how you called the nature the unpaid event manager :)

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  2. Nice write.Like the words: nature, the super event manager

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  3. Good One! Anticipation is gd in luv :)

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  4. Beautifully portrayed feelings are always a bliss to read ! nice work Sreedev !

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  5. Wonderful poem. the very opening line is arresting.

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  6. Hi Sreedev,

    I really enjoy reading your blog, and award you the Liebster award for your thoughtful and original poems.

    You can collect it here http://chaitanyavs.wordpress.com/2013/06/04/my-liebster-blog-award-im-a-liebster-blogster/

    Congratulations, and make sure you have all the elements in your post when you tell the world about the award!

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  7. Nice poem with wonderful words :)

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