Monday, 14 October 2013

Haiku: To Attain Moksha...




life’s last pilgrimage
old couples with their young, move
through greens, for moksha.








This is in response to the Write Tribe Contest 2-Haiku
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14 comments :

  1. kalpana solsi11:20 am, October 14, 2013

    What a divine haiku.
    Old couple going to pilgrimage with their young ones.

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  2. Sunita3:44 pm, October 14, 2013

    This is beautiful. A journey of life expressed so in a few words!

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  3. Philosophidian4:38 am, October 15, 2013

    I like that one.

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  4. Shiva10:32 am, October 15, 2013

    wow...this looks like a winning entry... lifes pilgrimage...amazing thought

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  5. PhenoMenon12:09 am, October 16, 2013

    Hey thanks for the entry :)

    PhenoMenon

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  6. Unknown9:40 am, October 16, 2013

    I loved this one.

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    1. Sreedev Soman10:13 am, October 16, 2013

      Thank You Geetha Madam...

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    2. K.A. Acharya12:31 am, November 05, 2013

      Hi Sreedev,
      I've nominated you for a Liebster...

      Go check this - http://theconchblower.blogspot.in/2013/11/my-first-liebster.html

      Regards
      Kiran.

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  7. Vasant Sakpal8:01 pm, February 10, 2014

    Nice one, loved it

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